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Tuesday, 6 December 2016

The best performance of my life.

The best performance of my life.

“Kia rite, kia rite, kia mau….Hii! D-day was here.  We’d been training for our annual cultural festival at Northland College for what seemed like ages.  It was my job to lead the boys haka and the whole crew.  I felt nervous when I had to start the haka.
The crowd got pumped up when I  started the haka. They were cheering loud. I had to start the Haka off loud so the boys will get pumped up too. I set the pace for the Haka so that they can keep that way and not go too fast. But they actually did. That’s when I came in and slowed the pace down.  That worked as the crowd cheered and clapped for our haka.

I felt nervous like the earth trembling as I walked up and down the rows. My arms were stiff as  a dead cat lying on the road.  I couldn’t do the actions properly.  I couldn’t yell the words I needed to say.  I thought I was going to forget all the actions and the commands.  I was so nervous.

But………
I had to ask the teachers how I was.  And they said “You were awesome!”


Now I wish I could stay and do it all over again.  That was my highlight of the term.

This is about athletics day I chose to write about my Sprints

WALT: use figurative and descriptive language to recount our athletics day  
Running

I stood up to the line waiting  
waiting for the clappers
Bang!
running and running
my arms were pumping
my hearts racing as fast as
my legs were pounding the ground


           the parents, the students
yelling and yelling
“ Go Go Go”
“Smoke him Toko smoke him”
Closer and closer I got to the end
I took 10 more running steps
over the finish line.
I came third .


We chose to write a poem about our athletics day. We used figurative and descriptive language to appeal to my audience.

WALT: use figurative and descriptive language to recount our athletics day  
High jump

It was my turn to jump
I ran my hardest
As I was running up
I nervously thought
I would miss the jump
But no, I was thinking wrong
I jumped over the pole
Boom! Bang!
I landed on the mat
Wow! I made it over.

My second jump now
I’m up next……
Gritting my teeth, walking, focussing
The teacher put it up a notch
It was at 1.10
My name got called out
“Toko,” Whaea Rosina said
I was running, running,...
I jumped in the air...
Smack!  I landed
“ Ohh yee-ah! I made that jump ”
I was so ecstatic I made that jump.

The bar went up 5 more centimetre’s
Oh man! I don’t know if can make this jump

Trying my hardest to make the jump
I felt like I was flying in the air
Bang!
I landed.  God damn!......
I didn’t make it that time.
It was my second run
my hardest I jumped and I knocked the bar off “Ohh no!”
I should’ve kicked my legs up
I knew as I jumped in the air I forgot to lift  up  my  legs
that’s why it fell off.

Next time!